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Chapter: When You Give It Away
Reviewed on: Friday, June 15, 2007 at 12:32am
/me grins.
Kids. They're crazy, but you just gotta love them.
I found this chapter VERY believeable, Lyonesse. The ending was fantastic. :-)
:-D
Thanks Arch!
I'm glad you liked it. Chapter three will be coming soon to a computer near you!
/exit the cheesy announcer's voice
Chapter: Love Is Something...
Reviewed on: Friday, June 15, 2007 at 12:26am
Very good, Lyonesse.
It was a little hard to figure out who everyone was, but I think I managed. Future Caparo fics are wonderful and I love the way you had this one going.
Chapter: When You Give It Away
Reviewed on: Monday, May 14, 2007 at 8:43pm
I love her cussing in Linmyra.
Leaving the baking soda where she can't reach it... Heh... I store things on top shelves and can't reach them because I'm short, not because I have a baby coming.
Who's Dr. Riva? Her OB/GYN?
Cute to bring in DV-soulmates.
If you ever want to get away from Caparo for a little while, please, do it. We don't ever want to be a cage.
All children are imps. :-)
And all children love to make small messes. Or big messes. Flour is fun to throw, therefore, they throw it.
Olive-green eyes? Ooh, that sounds pretty.
Awwww.I always knew ever since I was a little girl that I wanted to name my first daughter after my own mother.
Werewolf! Sweet!
You have such beautiful names for them. So much meaning, and so lovely to say...
"God Will Increase Wolves"? "Rock of God's Supplanted"? Um... that could be a little weird.
"Domination" pizza? Awww!
And "Peter Cottontail"! That is SO cute!
So who is she calling for help? Her husband, other people? I hope she gets it!
Overall verdict: Awwwwwww!
Anne
Chapter: When You Give It Away
Reviewed on: Monday, April 30, 2007 at 10:31pm
* Starry rushes to the rescue.
I'll save the day, for I am (turns around in a circle) Super Starry!!!
* Lyonesse cheers and applauds and provides theme-music—
DoodooDOOOOOOO!
Chapter: When You Give It Away
Reviewed on: Friday, April 27, 2007 at 9:37pm
Awww, another really cute chapter.
*Nuala giggles at Bati trying to reach the high shelf to get the baking soda.
I love all the names you picked out for your kids.
*Nuala can't wait to read scene III
*Nuala giggles at Bati trying to reach the high shelf to get the baking soda.
I love all the names you picked out for your kids.
*Nuala can't wait to read scene III
~Megan~
:-D
Thanks for reviewing! Sorry it took so long to reply back.
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, and I'm writing the other one now.
* Lyonesse blows raspberries at Nuala for laughing at her Caparo!self
And I like those names too. :-) Well, duh, if I'm going to name my kids them...
Mid u, Geneti!
Don't worry about it!
*Nuala blows raspberries bak.
...I wonder how a dog would look blowing raspberries...
...I wonder how a dog would look blowing raspberries...
Mid u, Bati!
Chapter: When You Give It Away
Reviewed on: Friday, April 27, 2007 at 12:41pm
/me sniggers. Pregnancy-acrobatics... Go, Hes, go!
I like John. I wanna know more! It's my right as sister-in-law (Poor man. He's going to have loads of those. But can I be special? As your little sister?) HINTWannaseemoreLyowritings!/HINT
I like John. I wanna know more! It's my right as sister-in-law (Poor man. He's going to have loads of those. But can I be special? As your little sister?) HINTWannaseemoreLyowritings!/HINT
Ooh, I like the name Sarah... And your little cub getting all excited :)
You want to leave?
/me gets watery eyes
What did I do?!
/me gets watery eyes
What did I do?!
Aww, I love children... And Greek God-ness.
Yes, you said it yourself, silly kitty!
There will be enough room, you just wait. Like I said, I'll take the tree.Bati wasn’t all too sure there would be enough room. But, with a little creative reshuffling?“Well, what d’you know,” she said, moving Esther before she squashed the bread and turning the oven on to pre-heat. “There’s room enough after all?”
Aw, I love all the names. Beautiful!
/me giggles. What predicament have you gotten yourself in, oh Lyo...
Oh, and I tried to reply to your review-reply for Be Still, My Heart, but the site ate it 'cause it would be my third review. BLAH for you, site.
So here it is:
/me whines
Aww, Lyo! Stupid Almighty Authoress Powers... I want to know!
Ah, of course the snake couldn't have written it himself. I'm assuming it's a him, dunno why. Feels male. Is it? Sorry, dumbness over here.
Aww, Lyo! Stupid Almighty Authoress Powers... I want to know!
Ah, of course the snake couldn't have written it himself. I'm assuming it's a him, dunno why. Feels male. Is it? Sorry, dumbness over here.
Good, because I love looking deeper, finding double meanings and layers and analyzing things. Only, I can't find it! I read it again, paying attention to every word, but I can't! Maybe if I read it again later...
Does it has to do anything with Lyo's past, her parents death?
Does it has to do anything with Lyo's past, her parents death?
And who's the red shell-thing in Bast's hair, by the way? I can't think fo anyone, sorry whoever-you-are.
Wha? I'm the best? How? Did I miss something? Silly lyra...
/me blushes and hugs her sister and runs away
/me blushes and hugs her sister and runs away
Love,
Krish
P.S.: Good gods, this is a long review.
Krish
P.S.: Good gods, this is a long review.
Okay, I'm sorry it took so long to get back to you on this. :-) Thanks for reminding me, chick.
And sorry I haven't been writing lately. I'm working on five things simultaneously and all of them are almost done. You'll have to wait just a bit longer, I'm afraid (HINT: Oneofthemisthethirdandfinalchaptertothisstory!)
And you like the name Sarah, do you? Well I shall tell the person she's named after (whom you may or may not know, wink wink) that you say so.
I'm not going to make you sleep on a tree, equally-silly-cougar. And thanks! I'm glad you love the names. So do I. big grin
Now for other review:
Okay, okay, I'll stop being the Annoying Authoress and let you in on something. The snake is unimportant. He was just a pawn. He was meant to die (even though he didn't know it) by whomever it was who sent him.
The person who wrote the message is the same person who sent him. And this very same person also has a dark past with Lyonesse. And he, as you very well now know, is Arcas.
Before Arcas came with Jordan and fox-boy to their side of the Wall, Lyonesse and Bastet knew that he was a theri and a feral and somewhere in the Compound. So when Lyonesse had her nightmare, she dreamt that he had found out where he was and sent something after her.
Makes sense now?
And the red shell belongs to Kimi, who's a small, red-shelled turtle.
And yes, you are the best. Mid u, tymodile. Thanks for the long review, I loved it!
Chapter: When You Give It Away
Reviewed on: Friday, April 27, 2007 at 10:29am
* Nanuq laughs
Oh, I like this. I like it a lot. You're so good at writing scenes like this that I'm frankly jealous.
Good job as always.
Oh, I like this. I like it a lot. You're so good at writing scenes like this that I'm frankly jealous.
Good job as always.
* Lyonesse laughs at her silly modeso
Thanks, Theime. Don't worry, you'll be getting your cameo in the next chapter. Which I am writing right now, so there! And thanks...it means a lot. You should write a fic about your own kids, you should. :-) I'm positive you're better at it than you think.
;-) Sorry this is so late. Mid u!
Chapter: When You Give It Away
Reviewed on: Friday, April 27, 2007 at 9:07am
Aww, poor Bati. Kids are all crazy, the lot of them. And young kids always attach themselves to me. Its scary.
Andrew
Andrew
* Lyonesse cracks up
Yeah, pretty much, eh? And I would have thought kids would like you...you just seem that kind of boy. :-DKids are all crazy, the lot of them.
Thanks for reviewing! Glad you liked it.
Chapter: When You Give It Away
Reviewed on: Friday, April 27, 2007 at 8:58am
This is great, Hestia. The kids are adorable, and I like the comparison between John and Godric.
:-D Thanks. Coming from you, that means a lot. Didn't know whether you knew that or not.
And yeah, I kinda had fun comparing the two. Guys do seem to pale in comparison once you get someone from that magnitude, don't they?
Chapter: Love Is Something...
Reviewed on: Tuesday, April 24, 2007 at 7:16pm
/me aws at little Michelle
What do ya know? When I was about 4 or 5, I would sleep eat (like sleep walking, except I always went to the fridge and ate things). One time I ate an entire tub of butter. I blame it on the whole no-sugar-in-case-you-go-diabetic thing. I was sick as a dog the next day.
/me laughs, realizing that she is a dog.
/me laughs, realizing that she is a dog.
Porcelain Prince.../me chuckles
“Gaaah! Your tias and tios are bad influences, you know that?”
“Uh-huh. Tia Ceithi says to deal with it,” Michelle said wisely.
/me snickers. Merc would be one to say that.
“Uh-huh. Tia Ceithi says to deal with it,” Michelle said wisely.
/me snickers. Merc would be one to say that.
Awww, I don't want you to have to leave Caparo ever Tia! Permanent 'impose all you want' mat is in front of my door for you, ok?
Aww! Cute sister moment. I loved it Tia! It was great!
/me can't wait to finally live in Caparo.
/me can't wait to finally live in Caparo.
~Megan~
* Lyonesse cracks up
Megs, that's so adorable! Except for, unlike you, I was actually conscious when I did it which gave my siblings more of a cause to tease me. They still bring it up every now and then, much to my embarassment. But...well, if you can't live with 'em, bring in the Exterminator, as they always say.
Cute pun, btw. Wish I could say something about me roaring like a lion when I'm angry...oh wait. I can. Heh.
And yes, she would. And that's exactly what my own answer would be.
* Lyonesse hugs
Of course I know I'll be able to impose all I want. You're just good like that. :-) And just you wait for Scene III...
:-D Yeah, gotta love those sister moments. And I'm glad you loved it!
And neither can I, Megs...neither can I...
/me gives Lyonesse a quick patch up with the duct tape.
Oh, my mother brings it up all the time. Along with all the other foods I used to eat during those little night excursions that I can't even remember. And I was a devious little devil too. One time, I actually got my brother's toy sword from his toybox, dragged the kitchen chair over to the front door, stood on the chair and used the toy sword to reach the rest of the way so that I could undo the chain and get outside. And I used to always hide in the racks of clothes at stores. My mom used always jokes that those Code Adam signs on all the stores should say Code Megan.
/me hugs back.
Well then, I can't wait for Scene III.
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