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Name: Krish
Chapter: C'est la Vie
Reviewed on: Wednesday, September 5, 2007 at 10:22am
I liiiike it. It's all very Hestiaish. I really loved the first scene with Isabelle.
And yes, you did great with me! I really love being in fics. And that's exactly something I would say before sauntering/skipping out smugly.
And oooh that particular mood is SO damn recognizable. And bah, I wouldn't touch them, I hate mint chocolates! Chocolate is *warm*y goodness, don't ruin it with mint!
And aww my poor baby, come get a hug.
And grr at Arcas. I'm so happy I hurt him. That just made my life.
Love you,
Dami
Name: Andrew
Chapter: C'est la Vie
Reviewed on: Monday, August 27, 2007 at 10:45pm
That's amazing...
Sorry for hittinng you! Tws an accident, I swear!
Hestia Hesperus replies:   
What's amazing?
( grins )
S'okay. I forgive you.
Name: Nanuq
Chapter: C'est la Vie
Reviewed on: Monday, August 27, 2007 at 10:14pm
I like very much. If you need another beta, let me know. :-)
Hestia Hesperus replies:   
:-D If I need a beta other than Anne (which I really will start needing very soon), you will be the first I'll come to, don't worry. In fact, this upcoming chapter may just need some of your assistance when I get started on writing it...
Nanuq replies:   
Shininess.
Just let me know.
Name: StarrySkies
Chapter: C'est la Vie
Reviewed on: Monday, August 27, 2007 at 8:28pm
I do love you Hes. And I love the story! It's doing great so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.
Hestia Hesperus replies:   
hugs her starry Star
Glad you liked it! I really am. (:-P Might help me better if I knew which parts you liked so I know what more to incorporate into future chapters...)
And I'm thinking that a Yo-yo part should be coming up very soon indeed...;-)
Name: Krish
Chapter: Every Story is a Love Story
Reviewed on: Tuesday, July 31, 2007 at 10:34am
Oh, and that was rather mean and unecessary.
Give me an example, someone doing that?
Hestia Hesperus replies:   
Erm...*huh*?
Name: Krish
Chapter: Every Story is a Love Story
Reviewed on: Monday, July 30, 2007 at 4:54am
I like it. Why shouldn't I?
It's beautiful and terribly sad, but the end was hopeful... As it is always.
And you won't be alone for long.
Love
Dami
Hestia Hesperus replies:   
hugs her modile tightly
I'm very glad you liked it, and I hope you like the second chapter and review me to tell me whether I did good with your character or not.
And I really do hope I won't be alone for long...
Name: Andrew
Chapter: Every Story is a Love Story
Reviewed on: Monday, July 30, 2007 at 3:10am
I bet Amphie finds it that summer, sorry.
That's the great thing about the pack. We're a story within life, and we're the life within a story. Ooh, philosophical...
Great, great story. I loved it.
Andrew
Hestia Hesperus replies:   
Oh, you'll see where the necklace ends up, don't worry.
And, yes, that comment was very philosophical. ;-) You wouldn't mind if I borrowed it for this upcoming chapter, would you? Promise I'll give you credit...
And thanks for reviewing! Glad you liked the story, modele.
Name: Archy
Chapter: Every Story is a Love Story
Reviewed on: Sunday, July 29, 2007 at 7:55pm
/me smiles.
Beautiful work, Hestia.
I hope that Lyonesse is able to do what she must to find healing.
Hestia Hesperus replies:   
hugs
Thanks! And you're right about "doing what she must"...but you already know what happens.
Name: Nanuq
Chapter: Every Story is a Love Story
Reviewed on: Sunday, July 29, 2007 at 7:54pm
Hestia,
1. You wrote it. 2. I like everything you write.
So how could I dislike this?
I hope there's more.
Hestia Hesperus replies:   
Very glad you feel that way. ;-) And sorry about the previous summary I put with this story. I was rather pissy that night...
Name: Anne Walsh
Chapter: Every Story is a Love Story
Reviewed on: Sunday, July 29, 2007 at 7:52pm
Pretty!
Now if it only works. Lyonesse really needs some closure, but can she find it?
I hope so...
Hestia Hesperus replies:   
:-D Thank you, madame. And of course you already know what is going to happen, (seeing as how you wrote it), but I shall try my very best to throw a curve-ball or three that you won't be expecting. :-P See? I can keep some secrets...

This was inspired by the Dangerverse, cradled by the old style of writing, and nurtured by the Harry Potter series. Thus, the only part I really played in this was the singing of the lullaby and changing of the melody. And so, without further ado, I present to you my ink-and-parchment infant...


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