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Reviewed on: Monday, February 25, 2008 at 5:02am
Aaaaaaack I didn't review this? How simply awful of me.
Anyway. Baaaahtisheep o'mine I loooove it. It was really beautiful and it was Pack and exactly how the problem solving here goes but that ending was Not Good and of course you won't do it, you never ever would because you love me too much (yes that was random) and you're way too strong to do that and even though we both know that sometimes, it's too much but even then you won't break, you'll go on and on and on and it'll hurt but you'll still go on and have no idea how you're doing it, and then, slowly, things will get better and you'll think yourself silly for ever wanting to give up which means that you won't become feeeeeral because you just can't because you're too you. Humpf.
Anyway. Baaaahtisheep o'mine I loooove it. It was really beautiful and it was Pack and exactly how the problem solving here goes but that ending was Not Good and of course you won't do it, you never ever would because you love me too much (yes that was random) and you're way too strong to do that and even though we both know that sometimes, it's too much but even then you won't break, you'll go on and on and on and it'll hurt but you'll still go on and have no idea how you're doing it, and then, slowly, things will get better and you'll think yourself silly for ever wanting to give up which means that you won't become feeeeeral because you just can't because you're too you. Humpf.
And oh yes, you'd miss moi.
/me poses
And that was one silly review. I'm tired. And need to run to the movies. And do my hair. Because it's a bird's nest even though you didn't say anything about there being birdies in my hair :P And aww, couldn't I have tickled Kalliewallie's nose with my awesome tail? But I still was awesome in all my sleepingness. :-D
/me poses
And that was one silly review. I'm tired. And need to run to the movies. And do my hair. Because it's a bird's nest even though you didn't say anything about there being birdies in my hair :P And aww, couldn't I have tickled Kalliewallie's nose with my awesome tail? But I still was awesome in all my sleepingness. :-D
I'm sillyyyy, Bati. Help me. Save me.
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TuDami
TuDami
Reviewed on: Friday, February 8, 2008 at 12:07pm
Hes...that was beautiful. And so true. I loved it.
Reviewed on: Friday, February 8, 2008 at 7:50am
Beautiful story. I don't like the ending, but I do see how it follows.
*hugs her Bati*
Reviewed on: Friday, February 8, 2008 at 7:07am
Yes, I would rather not be stuffed, thank you. :) I loved it!
Reviewed on: Thursday, February 7, 2008 at 10:25pm
This is really, really amazing.
The Den room sounds like my living room, sans the menagerie of course. :-)
You really do characters' thoughts well, you know that? This chapter fits perfectly with how I see the Pack responding to the Camp Sicko incident. The details we don't hear about in NL canon are great too—Lyonesse not liking medicine because of past experiences, the Den patrolling, et cetera. I like muchly.
And the bit at the end about going feral is just beautiful. Scarily, hauntingly so, but it is.
Keep it up! :-)
— Josh
Reviewed on: Thursday, February 7, 2008 at 10:11pm
I really do not like that ending.
It speaks of bad things, things I don't like to think about.
The story you've crafted here gives us a good look at the inner workings of Lyra's mind, which I really like. And I like how you captured everyone so perfectly...